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It was in the early afternoon. Aorev was training in the garden with other young elves of the Oriental Tribe. He was explaining all the differences between backbends, frontbends and sidebends, all the different splits possible to do while doing bends and he was giving advice to the ones who needed some. He stood up and took a look at the way the elves were training. Seeing everything was done well he bent forward and put his hands on the grass right in front of his feet. He lifted his bottom and bent his back to sit on his own shoulders, standing on his arms. He brought back his legs on the sides of his head and straightened them. All the other elves were looking at him, admiring this beautiful position he was graciously doing.

In the meanwhile Aaulin was still in his bedroom. He went to bed quite late last night and wanted to rest a bit more. He paid a visit to his teacher Emaryl to talk a bit with him and also to train. He promised to himself he would not train this time and won't let Emaryl admire the beauty of his body but he did not manage to resist to this new gift Emaryl offered him, so to please and thank his teacher he did some flexible poses. Laying on his bed he waited about twenty minutes, half asleep, before getting up and going to the bathroom. He sat on the edge of the bed, stretched his arms and legs, bent his back further and further until his head reached his bottom and then stood up slowly. He walked to the bathroom and turned on the water. He entered it and leisurely closed his eyes.

Aorev was still in the garden with the other elves. He was stretching and looking at the performances of the others, thinking of the afternoon he was going to spend with his brother. Aaulin promised him some limber exercises and some other sweet things for this day and Aorev could not wait any longer. He wanted too much to spend his afternoon with Aaulin. He stopped what he was doing and asked the others, who were still training, to come back tomorrow. He was too eager to train with Aaulin and wanted to have a bath before and eat a little something. Everybody went back home and Aorev ran to the palace.

He first went to the living room, a large and beautiful room with marble columns and cushions everywhere around Oriental low tables. There was a huge glass of fruits on one of these low tables  and Aorev ate some. He ate those particular fruits that look like plums but aren't really plums. This is a blue fruit that contains lots of sugar and which is very tasty and juicy. That was Aorev's favourite fruit. He could eat these fruits everyday without getting tired of them. He also drunk a cup of tea before going upstairs to take his bath.

In the bathroom Aaulin was drying his long and silky hair. After that he put on a large and light pants and get out of the room. He stayed stood, looking at Emaryl's gift, a wonderful and well detailed golden waistband. He took it and put it on his belly, making his waist very small and tight. It was something Aaulin always loved to do. Waist cinching was part of his life. It was so relaxing for him, above all after a fresh and cool bath like that. He also enjoyed a lot the soft pressure of the jewel on his skin and waist. This reminded him the hours spent with his beloved teacher when he was younger. These moments were still anchored in his mind and from time to time he would pay a visit to Emaryl, like this last night. Training with him was bringing back good memories and he wanted to pass this to his lovely little brother.

Aorev climbed up the stairs on all fours and ran in the bedroom, singing his favourite song. He was lost in his mind and did not even pay attention to his brother who was sitting crossed legs on the bed. There were no doors separating the bedroom and the bathroom so Aaulin could look at his cute brother from the bed while training to waist cinching. Such a very sweet moment for him. The sight of this beautifully shaped and naked body was a real pleasure for his eyes and he could not help but stare, even though it would have been considered as voyeurism. But Aaulin did not really care nor think about that. He just stoop up, walked on tip toes to the bathroom and whispered to Aorev's ear, "Does it feel good ?" Aorev gave a start so he was not expecting his brother to be here.

"What are you doing here ? I thought you were downstairs."

"Well no. I slept more than usual because I was pretty tired yesterday and went to bed quite late at night."

"Oh I see... You were with Emaryl, right ?"

"Ooh ! Aren't you jealous my dear little brother ?"

"Not at all !"

Aorev turned around, showing his wet back to Aaulin who was staring at him without saying a word. His gaze slowly went down. Aorev never really liked when his brother was going to see Emaryl so late. He was always imagining them doing naughty things.

"Are you imagining weird things between..."

"Not at all !" replied Aorev without letting Aaulin finish his question.
Aaulin noticed his brother was jealous so he grabbed his wrist and took him out of the bath.

"Hey ! What are you..."

He kissed him and hugged him tight.

"I love only you so please, stop being jealous about things that don't even exist."

Aorev did not reply anything and just hugged him back. The afternoon was rather promising.
I wrote this during classes and reworked on it today. I hope
this was pleasant to read and please, let me know what
you think about it. I'll be very happy to know your opinions
and impressions.

Thanks a lot in advance to people who read the text !

Story and characters by ~Kombanwa ©
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yuni Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
I must say I read this text three times already before I had the time to comment, and my main impression is that it's magically as beautiful as your drawings. There's something in this text that I also love about your drawings, I think they have a lot in common somehow ^.^ I really enjoyed that this is a story and not just a description, this makes the characters so alive and I love this style of writing even more than the usual descriptions ^-^

Of course my absolute favorite was Aaulin's morning stretch on his bed, which was both a little bit funny and very beautiful as I imagined it! ^o^ I bet only Aaulin can so easily do a morning stretch like that! xD Also really love it how he tried on the waist band while sitting cross legged on the bed, such a lovely scene that I immediately imagined in details in my head! I also really love to read their dialog because I think it's beautiful when we let our characters speak and it says so much about them! ^-^

This is such a beautiful story and I so wish you could write more stories because honestly I just keep re-reading this one again and again! XD <3
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Aldric-Cheylan Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
Ooh thank you so very much for such a sweet and kind comment ! ;w; This makes me so happy to know you enjoyed it that much. It really means a lot to me that you like my stories and I really feel very very happy you re read it several times ! :'3

I can't thank you enough for your so very kind words about this text. ,I was very happy to write it and even happier now to know you enjoyed it that much.

I'm very glad to know you enjoyed this part of Aaulin's morning stretch. ^-^ It was fun to imagine him doing it while writing it. I don't think of a special story when I write in fact, it comes like that, like a film in my head while I'm writing and it's like I'm in the story with my characters, so to me is seems very alive and I'm very happy to know you appreciate this text ! thank you so much Yuni ! <3
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